Mandronette De Khyre

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This is pretty good. I haven't read many werewolf stories so this would be ineresting if i could read even further. This is really well written also. There vry little ...

Well...Like others i'd rather not give repitition to the other critiques of this peice but.. WOW This litteraly got my heart pumping I was ingulfedin the suspense and such vivid ...

This is slightly confusing. And you asked what we may think of what is on the 35th floor. Well you vaguely ,if you did, hint at what may be up ...

I loved this. This was great i liked how it is in first person now and how you catch your characters personality in it. This is captivatin and i would ...

I loved this. This was great i liked how it is in first person now and how you catch your characters personality in it. This is captivatin and i would ...

This is one of the few peices i would call God like Besides the guessing of what the narrator is (which i really like about it) its great. I have ...

Okay so thr main char gets to the friend Right? Maybe. The friend should start his own "Story". He should become what i call a "ROgue" in my stories. He ...

Okay this should be a split personality. This should be like.. Even if he is an angel he should have evil thoughts right? Soo He should gain a asplit personality. ...

I really think this is good. But if you could had made it a tad bit longer i would had loved it. I hope you keep writing more. p.s-There a ...

This as very good. The way u switched between present and paste didn't really go well with me though. But as whole this was great.